thank you!! that means a lot for us, about the english typos, half were intentional, while the other half probably is because english isn't our native language haha, but i really appreciate the feedback, thank you!
Well then it's especially well written for being by non native speakers! There's a lot of emotion in the storytelling. And the slow zoom out at the end is a nice touch.
Hey, one bug report, during the lockers, if you die while you were disappearing into a locker, you are still invisible when you respawn. Maybe just make sure visibility/opacity gets reset on respawn.