I feel so lucky! I came across your blog on tumblr and immediately jumped to read, this was so good. I think its fun when you get to play an MC with some powers and I really like the whole witness protection angle and the fact that it'll explore heavier themes.
Other thoughts MC is fun and likeable forget i said anything if that's not how you intended them to be. Scarlett was sus I let her touch my MCs face for some reason idk because my MC is too nice I actually think a little internal monologue from MC could benefit that part like humor or why did i agree to this >:(
Leah was sus too honestly everyone was lmao (can you even be too paranoid though?)
There was one small mistake i played with a male Viorel
"Try to explain to her warmly that he needs to stay silent and come with me."
Other than that I'm excited for the next chapter!