It has potential... I understand the need of redoing the art (The demon one seemed from Hazbin Hotel 100%), so it's important to take time into that too.
Story aspect, i like it so far, but its true that being a 0.2 I find it kinda... empty, maybe try to name the versions different, like 0.02 (people understand better that is a waaaay earlier version)
Anyway, I will watch your project with great interest. Good luck!
PD: You left one sentence in the dialogue with the owl without translating "Debe de haber muchas especies desconocidas" or something like that. I don't care, 'cause I'm spanish and I understood it perfectly, but just so you know
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Oh sorry, maybe I misspoke a bit.... What I meant is that the first style of Queen of the Demons (don't remember her name right now), her first version, had a Hazbin Hotel kinda style for me. Now it seems more unique.
I didn't dislike it nor I'm saying that you plagiarized anything (sorry if it seemed like that) but this versions is more you.
Anyway, again, sorry for the misunderstanding. Good luck with your game!