while it's very good, it feels like a significant quality decrease from umbrelloid's usual work, as of right now; it's a fine story, i could see it working fine as a Ao3 fic with pictures attached, but 3.99 USD for a clicker that you have absolutely no interaction with is a bit much. there are a total of ~7 sexual interactions in a very short story, and there are a total of 4 arcs, with the jump between the third and the last so large it feels as if it takes all agency from the actual player. |