Amazing update, I recently got a new laptop and had to play the entire thing over again, and I must say that this a timeless experience. I personally am a big fan of Vannyr so this chapter was very warming to read.
If I had a complaint, it would definitely be the names of the Moves, not just with the main character (though him especially) but in general, Sky Aiming Spear has to be the worst special move I have ever heard of. Cosmic Eclipse Slash is also a bit corny for my taste but nevertheless I enjoyed my time.