These are just some things I found that might need fixing.
To say what I found wrong:
Fingers go crazy on the first hug scene when she puts her hands on her cheeks.
She bounces up the stairs instead of walking.
When she reaches the door she stairs directly at the wall.
Meeting the husband and shaking his hand, his hand glitches his elbow into his stomach.
My own thing but the first lunch is just eggs.. maybe spice it up with a pasta dish instead?
When spawning into the store for the first time, you get glitched inside of Sarah and you can't see much of anything apart from the story clerk, as Sarah is behing you.
On the quest "working time" When you come home and Sarah talks to you in a rednight gown, her eyes are closed instead of open, which is... freaky.
Those are just a few things I found.