A fun concept for a game and solid for something made in 48 hours! I see that you asked for feedback so I give it in the video along with some ideas on what I think would be cool additions, but will also write it out here for your reference…
Pros
- Short and sweet
- Funny idea which I can definitely see fleshed out.
- Simple to grasp the concept of both the story and the gameplay
Cons
- It needs some graphical options. The chromatic aberration is very harsh in this game and my laptop chugs a little even with it being in just the 1 room.
- (SPOILERS) Anticlimactic endings. I was hoping for the CIA to bust in or something like that when I eventually did fail. Some basic game over animations would be handy here.
- Could just be since I was lagging a bit, but I feel the collision of stuff on the floor messed with movement when trying to move around quickly, maybe move the sink and the chair around and leave more space in the middle?
Ideas
- Small one to start, it would be cool to see the shadow from the CIA agent outside the door when he knocks, there’s a light bleeding under the door, would be a neat detail. In a similar vein to this, seeing some birds outside the window at times would be a nice touch.
- This is more of a stylistic idea, but it could be cool to have there be a thunderstorm happening in the background. Whenever the power goes out it’s due to a lightning strike, and I think the idea of there being a flash of lighting which reveals a bird at your window on occasion to be both a funny and creepy idea.
- Maybe not have the game be endless up to a point. I could imagine a cool sequence where after you get a certain amount of files you need to get out of the building as birds and agents descend upon you. Could make an endless mode separately if really wanted.
- I think something can be done with the whole “cover the webcam” stuff. Maybe something simple like how the hallway camera won’t work whilst the webcam is covered, but if uncovered for too long you’ll get busted. Not 100% what can be done with the webcam idea but given it’s pointed out along with other important parts of the game on the board, it would be neat to see a purpose. Otherwise I just question why the webcam is even there.
Overall a good base for a game which I feel can blend horror and comedy super well if fleshed out, hope to see more from it!