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Overall, I really liked this demo. The writing was excellent and I'm certainly looking forward to the next chapter in the story! However, there are a few small criticisms that I have: The main problem I have is that the bunny looks uncomfortably young for an nsfw game. While the cat appears to be about 19 or 20 years old, the bunny looks 14. He's certainly very adorable, but it honestly makes me feel uncomfortable seeing such a young looking character nude. Unfortunately I don't know enough about game development and art to point out the exact details that would need to be changed to rectify this, or if it even is something that can be changed at all. Another thing, and this is just a small nitpick, but something looks off about the art for the kitchen, the way small details blend together and look like they were drawn with an unsteady hand while other details are drawn perfectly. The last thing I want to suggest is that AI was used, as other scenes look great and were clearly made by a real artist. The street chase scene and the cafe dining area look particularly beautiful, credit where it's due. Even in the kitchen art that I criticized, the Lighting looks positively gorgeous, it's just some small details that seem suspicious, and I would hope to get confirmation that it is not AI. I apologize in advance for bringing into question your credibility as an artist, but with how frequently I've been seeing it used, especially in visual novels, I can't be too careful. And to be honest, even if the art is AI, the writing is good enough that I'd still pay money for it.