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THE UPDATE WAS SO WORTH THE WAIT! I got the email this morning but only just got around to playing and seriously this is a great progression. I've only tried Benji's route so far but my god is this an awesome progression. 

As much as I like the romantic pathway with him, I can't help but enjoy how you explored his clinginess via the friendship pathway. Act 2 for Benji felt like an awesome mix of uneasy and charming, his romantic pathway has so much sincerity and his friendship path were great at showing the more uneasy sides to him (the shower bit in this path especially worked to show his default overbearingness in the player's life).

I have the same compliment before, that being how you characterise the player - I ADORE getting to play the perspective of a genuinely moldable character rather than the same forgiving and naieve MC. The way you allow the player to stand up for themselves and challenge Benji was such a relief. Going forward I hope you're able to explore the darker side of Benji's psyche within his route, I adored seeing the subtle peeks into his unhealthy behavior (i.e. him isolating the player by disregarding the cops as a reasonable source of support)

Hopefully we get to see his inner creeper come through, especially in his platonic pathway. Awesome update, counting the days for Act 3, keep up the awesome writing, was awesome to chat last update (plus the new sprites and music were awesome) :)


P.S. Just noticed  a bug in Ellis' route, when you call him during day one and think to yourself how unaffected he sounds, the player's name is written above as if it's spoken dialogue. Just an FYI, I haven't seen anything else similar

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Hey, Scarscarow, good to see you again!!! I’m still walking on clouds from your beautiful fanart, and stare at it when I need a pick-me-up!

Knowing how much you liked Benji, it means SO much you still approve! Writing him is tough since he’s been protag’s friend for so long, he’d have to get really desperate to go full mask off. For example, doing mostly pushing back/pulling away will lead to more aggressive interactions towards end of Act 2. I’ve been slow-burning it for now, but Act 3 will have more mask-off moments if the player goes that route. It’s possible to have a fluffy playthrough where protag never realizes...the TRUE horror, in my opinion!

So glad you enjoy the player! Their development is central to the story. Endings will be determined by Benji, Ellis, AND protag's trajectory, which includes staying the same, too.

THANK YOU for pointing out that error! It helps so much to have other eyes! Feel free to let me know if you find others. I’ll compile a list and fix them all at once in the near future, that way I can put out a revised update instead of flooding you all with multiple ones.

Thank you again for coming back to play, and you always have such fantastic feedback! I’m always down for a chat, so if you ever have any more thoughts/questions, you know where to find me :D

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Aaaagh I'm so happy to hear that!! Seeing all the new reviews you got is so awesome. Told the original group I played Act 1 with about the update and they're hyped to try it too, seeing this game grow in real time is the best part. Hope things keep up, the work you're doing is seriously impressive - plus I'm not sure if I love shitty Benji or sweet Ellis more now, I'm just excited to see how you balance scary and cute.

I think someone else mentioned it forever ago but as this game grows larger it may be worth looking into a discord group or something, could be a streamlined way of spotting the rare bug. Whatever you do going forward I just know this project will go far

Oh, I see Ellis is growing on you, eh? Shitty Benji vs Sweet Ellis is kinda funny!

Discord makes me nervous as I don't know much about it, and I wouldn't wanna do a bad job. I've heard about devs/artists getting destroyed due to stuff that occurred in their discords and honestly, that kinda scares me. But I'll look into it for sure.

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That’s fair, do whatever fits for you because it’s definitely working. If you did ever pursue it I’m sure people would be more than happy to help you out, otherwise just know that this game just keeps getting better and better!! So hyped to see where it goes