OOPS you made the presentation too good, very unfortunate mistake. The character art, UI interfaces, lovely detail in the backgrounds, all the hard work that absolutely paid off in dividends onscreen, its all so gorgeous its infuriating. Incredibly unbecoming.
The core gameplay loop is a novel idea, with the context behind it being very fun. The voice acting is a nice touch for the dialogue but I feel as if the writing can be very slow paced, especially during the introduction being especially overly wordy to get through.
Still, great job all around. Very appealing, very fun, gorgeous visuals, seething with envy. THATS how I know you did a good job.