Good story, well written. Several notes for feedback. First, turn on the "back" button, this is a VN if I accidentally click the mouse button I should be able to scroll back and read something I missed. This is standard, shouldn't be missing. Two, textbox opacity slider should be available, it's not. Three, the ability to name save files, this helps when there's branching paths a player wants to keep track of. Four, there should be zero buttons that open up an internet link - unless they're clearly labeled. I firewall these games for a reason, because sneaky devs like to be sneaky.
Have a nice day.