I've been running some test sessions of Battle Century S for my e-tabletop group, and I think we're generally enjoying it. There are a few issues that could be addressed in the next revamp (if further revisions are on the table?); sorting the traits into alphabetical order is one that would help.
One question - Meditative Healing (p. 60) is listed in the Psychic Traits section, but the description calls it a General Trait. Which should it be?
I've noticed some other typos as well in re-reading the book; if you'd like me to do some dedicated proofreading, let me know. :)
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Having been a chronic updater in the past, I'm reticent these days to make significant changes not just for fear of triggering a chain reaction that requires constant fixes, but because if I give the perfectionist bug in my head an inch she'll take a mile.
Having said that, it's been long enough that I can relax on that front a little and could do a v2 if it comes to that, especially since there's no print version (yet?) that will be rendered out of date.
So, by all means, I'd love to have that feedback, especially since you're having a good time—be at this for long enough, and you realize some critics just want to change fundamental design conceits to make games something they aren't. Would be nice if itch had a DM function, but alas.
Thanks!