Hello!!
Just played the game and I genuinely like what you made :>
I find the art style cute and the length of the novel just right (well atleast to me xd).
Sadly I can't give you a thorough opinion as the other person did, I'm not that good at writing reviews.
I can get behind the idea in some places so I didn't question it, like the "edible ending", this is your product so I don't question "what was the author thinking".
For something that you say is rushed and is a prototype, in my opinion its excellent and besides you can always come back to this project and fix things that you want.
I have read the conversation you had about the spelling mistakes and that you can't use the typing aid that you use. I don't know what other softwares renpy uses, I just use Notepad++ and set it up so that it checks my spelling automatically (as i am a non native english speaker)-but this is just a suggestion, whatever works/ is comfortable for you :>
I am sorry if the structure of this is confusing I am writing this as it comes up in my mind.
Keep up the good work, will definitely check out other works of yours in the future. <3
thank you so much for playing my game! I’m glad you enjoyed it, and think it has potential. I really want to do a remaster with some things I’m learning about characters development and story progression.
I actually have another yandere game currently in the works inspired by multiple works of SnaccPop studios and old creepypastas if that’s interesting to you. Sadly beyond the stars is on the back burner at the moment thanks to motivation issues.
ill look into what I can use to write better in the renpy engine itself maybe there is a autocorrect plugin
Also peek pfp love dazai.
Ahah, thank you!
I am familiar with SnaccPop studios and I loved their works so far. And if I find the creepypasta theme interesting, well hell yea I do ;D
As far as motivation goes don't burn yourself out take care of yourself and rest enough, thats what matters the most! <3
You don't have to rush anything :) A burnout is a creators worst nightmare.
And i hope you have luck in finding a plugin but if not I am sure there is someone that can go through and check the spelling for you, if not I can offer my help in that department if you take up my offer (it is okay if not, no hard feelings) (⁀ᗢ⁀)
Waiting patiently for future updates regarding you creations! I am sure what you make will be incredible! Take care have a great day/night. ( ´ ∀ `)ノ～ ♡