Love the writing here, even if it forced me to confront feelings that I do my best to suppress for the most part.
Great job on the art, and I like that there's still some interaction in jumping, and singing once you get past the story telling.
I think the pacing is an interesting choice - I feel like it parallels the message of the game well, and it's not a big deal if you have something else to do in the background, or are really patient, but I can see how it would turn some players away. At the end of the day though, its obvious this is intentional, so I respect building the game to your vision.
And good work with Luca on the music, the chill vibes of this Rock In remix suit the game really well. Great work!