The dialogue is incredibly slow. I feel like the delay between finishing the dialogue and being able to skip it is too long. The game was really dark. When the lights were off I couldn't see a thing, and I couldn't tell what was happening in the final cutscene. It also doesn't help that there isn't a flashlight. At some point I got stuck on the rail at the bottom of the stairs and had to start from the last checkpoint. That being said the checkpoints were appreciated. There are a lot of games out there that I got soft locked in and had to restart the entire thing. So I liked having checkpoints in the game. Overall it functions, it just needs some work.
But keep making games and don't get discouraged. I look forward to future developments.