Since you replied, (pleasantly surprised at the promptness, though I shouldn't be given your evident attention to detail) one minor complaint: it seems like you abandoned your laudable realism in two regards; 1) the MC has the typical AVN monster pecker, 2) the lack of pubic hair, particularly for the older women. It seems as if you kowtowed to prevailing AVN and mainstream US cultural tastes, tossing a couple bones to the audience I suppose. But that aside, I salute your craftsmanship!