Thank you so much for playing! Yeah fair points, I made the mistake of relying too much on Word's Spelling check and should have read through it myself to make sure things flowed nicely and also were grammatically correct. With Chris being better art I think that just comes from him being the last of the 3 characters I drew and therefore I had a better/clearer idea of what the characters would look like, though I didn't realise it was so stark a difference. I planned on cleaning up the art anyway so thank you for the feedback and I'll keep it mind