Oh my goodness... Before I say anything else, I just want to apologize for taking SO long to reply to your sweet message. You see, I'm a chronically OFF-line person, so I've only recently seen your message, but it's nothing personal at all.
That said, I wanted to thank you for your detailed review. I really appreciate it, and it put a smile on my face!! n_n Honestly, I still feel really vulnerable having this game out here, because I really did pour a lot of my real feelings into the story and dialogue, more than what I set out to write in anyway. So, I donno... I guess that huge vulnerability adds to how much receiving messages like this means to me. I don't think of the flower folks as just sprites on a screen, they are alive in their own right.
Anyway, I don't wanna go on and on and on, but again, I appreciate you taking the time to share this, and Rosea is just as touched!~ (Even though the poor girl is going through hard times.)
I've taken note of your criticism and will try to work on that. I know I have a habit of over explaining things. xD
Lastly, if you haven't at this point, I encourage you to play through the other routes in this demo, because the endings and other details through out the prologue vary. It isn't a one size fits all, and you'll be able to see different perspectives from pretty much everyone depending on the different choices you make.
Thank you once again, and have a great day!