"...she was squinting like a chinese person.." What? 😭 I'm enjoying the game so far but I want to let you know that could come off as very offensive. You could choose to change the dialogue or not but as an asian it does just come off a little stereotypical;; :(
thanks for your comment. I appreciate you sharing your opinion.
this phrase was written on behalf of the main character herself. she is not a "morally pure" storyteller, and some of her thoughts reflect her flaws, stereotypes, internalized biases, and etc.
As an author, I do not support or agree with such views. I didn't want to make fun of or offend any ethnic group, but I understand that it could be offensive. I'll think about how I can rephrase the text more correctly.