This was a very well written story. It has a very mysterious vibe to it. I like how some of our interactions with the NPC's are both negative and positive. It's like some give us hope and others tell us to give up. This was really nice. I ain't gonna lie, I thought a jump scare was gonna pop up somewhere during that. You make some freaky stuff man but you can darn sure tell a story. Keep up the good work.