Gave your game a try after someone on Reddit namedropped it as one of their favorite recently discovered games and I gotta say, whoever that was has good taste. Some of my favorite love interests in AVNs are redheads and/or childhood friends and, in a stroke of sheer genius, you've made a game with 3 of them so I was immediately invested.
I wasn't expecting to get sucked into the world and the characters quite as fast as I did. The world's pretty great even if the way we discover it is through a lot of exposition (which I'm not a fan of) but I do like that the expositing being done is usually in a dialogue involving the MC. Makes it feel less like you, the writer, are explaining the world to me, the reader, and more like a character bringing the MC up to speed after his 'hiatus'.
I do wish there was a bit more in the way of visual interest during certain scenes, more specifically the Weave ones. Like I can imagine what the Weave looks like but the fact that any scene involving it is just a blurred still is a shame imo.
Overall you've done some great work so far. The characters are likeable which makes it easy to get invested, the world is believable enough and quickly sucks you in, the writing is clear and crisp, and, for what I assume is your first real go at working with HS, the renders and characters look pretty damn good. I await part 4 with eager anticipation.