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Hello. This might be pretty long, apologies in advance ^^''... And quite a late comment too, but better late than never!

I read this VN around April 2025 while looking through various Menhera Jam entries. I think that of the several I read, this one was my favourite. Perhaps it is for the reasons that a previous commenter describes, that it manages to capture certain mindsets and experiences in such a raw way that feels quite refreshing. 

Lucia is both a charming and compelling character. Something about her daily life seen through the narrator, the ethical questions she challenges you with that betray some of her deeply held principles despite her eccentricity, and that reality of illness and dependency upon others without it being treated as a degrading way to live in any way, was really touching to me.

 I remember that when I got to a certain climactic scene where that really cool CG appears, it actually made me cry.  I can only offer my own interpretation as a single reader ofc, but the way it seemed like she was seeking so desperately to be Engaged with, as if she was had written this world (much like another famous VN witch) for that purpose, but as a character trapped on the other side of the screen,  just never could feel the truest confirmation that that acknowledgement was happening.

Of course this was all a game written in advance, but I happened to come across it at a point in my life where I was being faced with those questions; I was learning from the first time from people very dear to me that I could actually be quite an emotionally avoidant person, and how that could hurt them. That just listening without opening up your heart in return is not actually the virtue that it seems... So when, after trying to connect to another in many ways, even sharing her WIP VN writing lol, she turns directly to the player and says that actually, I think the caged bird is You, you're the one who won't sing for me, it was frighteningly Relevant. o_o 

And then the ending, just gosh... The epilogue switching more to her own PoV was quite interesting too. 

After I finished reading I wanted to make sure that this VN was on Vndb as well. added it myself though probably others have helped to improve upon my entry since then since my own understanding of the systems there are a bit limited.. 

And furthermore... By the time I had finished playing it, there were several points in the text and Imagery that stuck out to me and made me wonder based on vague osmosis, "Hm, is this a Dies Irae thing?" I had vaguely heard of that VN before but never was inclined to read it as the obviously fraught subject matters made me a bit wary, but ultimately I decided I might as well try it, simply hoping that I could glean a little more of what Purple Prose, this VN that had unexpectedly touched me so, wanted to communicate. 

So entered it with mostly low expectations, though taking meticulous notes, and by late August I came out of it with one of my favourite works of fiction. o_o I still don't entirely know how much I was intended to read back into PPfPP through this, but it resonated all the same. The surprisingly head-on exploration of irrational passions and fixations, the overattachment to pretence and "delusion" and narratives, and what it even is to be Chuunibyou, and how so so many characters and themes came back to that notion of seeking connection from others, wanting to make yourself understood, no matter how destructively, or whether to flee from that engagement entirely. Mercury is the planet of thieves and travellers... 

There are also things I was dissatisfied by in DI, maybe if the writers were more leftist than just Liberals they could be less utterly unserious about a few things ? lol but I would want to take up the remaining space here with neither that nor my countless further thoughts...  

Regardless, a lot of what I had found in both of these novels resonated surprisingly deeply and has led me to both do a lot of personal reflection and make some interesting discoveries.

I suppose what I hope to emphasise here, with this overly long comment from a total stranger,  is that I think the domino effects from finding and reading this fascinating work of yours genuinely have changed my life a lot and I wanted to express my gratitude for that.🙏  I believe that the witch was a true witch and her display of magic quite excellent. 

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Gosh, thank you so much! Not a late comment at all from my perspective (or at least I feel that I saw it at the right time) and no worries at all about length - I can be pretty long-winded myself. 

I'm glad you were so touched by Purple Prose. It was deeply personal for me - perhaps too much so I sometimes fear - and very much came out of where I was at at that time. I honestly wasn't sure what to make of it in retrospect before I saw your comment. I feel more comfortable that I can rest easy with respect to it and that I can move forward knowing that it existed for a time in conversation with you. 

I can't think of too much to say about your commentary on it specifically other than to say that you saw what I was trying to do with Lucia. I'm also moved by the fact that you felt so close to her and to the caged bird bit - I was quite proud of that part in particular along with the epilogue. You don't have to say or anything but I'm curious what you thought was going on in it (the epilogue); it's something I haven't seen anyone comment on and I've always wondered a little about it.

I'm honestly really happy you felt compelled to track down Dies Irae because of this little VN and that you liked it. It's a favorite of mine and affected me deeply at the time I read it, even with what I suppose could be considered its flaws (I feel that you're right that it isn't quite serious enough in some ways to fully interrogate itself), but it's not something I have ever had an easy time recommending to anyone due to...well...yeah...

Anyways, thank you again for commenting! It puts things in perspective for me as I think on what to do next and it means a lot to me you cared enough about my work to share your thoughts and feelings about it with me. She's probably got nothing on the witch I had in mind while writing her but Lucia still put all her heart into displaying whatever it is she could be said to have in the hopes it would be seen by and resonate with at least one person. From one somewhat emotionally avoidant person to another, I hope the point you're at in your life right now is a good one; if my work here was in any way helpful or meaningful for you in your journey through it, that's all I could ask.

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omg I hadn't logged in here for a while but it's a lovely coincidence to see this reply on the same day as I did :0 

Yayy I'm very glad that comment could aid in your own re-assessment of this work. I'll definitely look forward to whatever you have planned next!

As for the epilogue ooh, I remember trying to figure out what it could all mean myself at the time too, I should definitely give it a reread sometime and get back to you with more detailed thoughts!

But from what I can remember, it Was interesting to see Lucia bouncing off these different characters, and those curious little visitors appearing after her epic explosion of power,  wanting to help to guide her in some way, I wonder how I should take it all... whether they are also constructs born from herself on some level, like a witch's furniture? 

(Also maybe I should reread the part in the main story where we get the excerpt from Lucia's own VN writing and her OCs, I feel like I remembered something from that being repeated/recontextualised in the epilogue here but perhaps I'm misremembering)

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I definitely hope you'll like what I think I'm working on next!

Also, thank you for sharing. To be honest, what I was concerned with was whether or not people thought it was something that was literally happening or not or if it was just in her head - to be even MORE honest (perhaps too much so), it was basically me stuffing characters and ideas I've had rattling around in my head for years into this little jam VN as something of a foothold to perhaps circle back around to and expand on them later and to have them intermingle with what I was working on/through. I don't know if that devalues your experience with the VN and I don't want it to do that or to take away from what your impressions were. It's just something I've had on my mind although, if you do end up rereading it, I'd definitely be interested in what you take from that.

A larger worry I've had is that Lucia crossed the line between being someone with an illness she has to live with and navigate and being, like, genuinely unwell. Perhaps that's unbecomingly possessive of me with respect to letting what I wrote exist as whatever it happens to be to the people who read it. Ultimately, I feel it is more important how you took it - to the point that I wonder if I perhaps am saying too much - but it is something I think I do intend to come back to one day, for better or for worse.

Anyway, again, thank you - it's funny you hadn't logged in for a while; I also hadn't in some time. I guess that's just the nature of how people intersect. Your comment happened to intersect with me at the start of a jam month I'd been going back and forth on participating in or not and I mean it when I say it was absolutely what I needed to see/hear. I don't know if I'll finish what I have in mind for it, how I'll do it, and if it'll be worth your time but I appreciate it and you all the same. 

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Ohh I see! It definitely doesn't devalue it, don't worry, and it is interesting to hear this kind of Behind the Scenes reasoning for it...  It's nice that they could make their debut here and indeed perhaps will make a return somewhere ohoho

As for Lucia, that's a fair worry to have too. I do think sometimes discussions about mental health that I've seen online can get too prescriptive in how every effort must aspire towards normalcy/respectable functioning in society whether it's achievable or not, and that leads to the exploration of more complicated feelings being discouraged as irresponsible  or unproductive to be frank about. So I do appreciate how Lucia is written and the reader is invited to just immerse themselves in her worldview and thoughts for a while. Like, behaving in ways that seem strange or experiencing such intense emotions or inarticulable moments of Unreality can all coexist with still being a person who deserves to have their autonomy and perspective respected, even if  a lot of media doesn't approach those depictions with the most grace nodnod. Reminds me of all the responses to the options in that "SAY SOMETHING YOU ASSHOLE" scene. And somewhat of the Mariage Sorciere and their problems a bit again. Ooh and if you do return to these ideas I'll be curious to see for sure

Also dw, I don't mind hearing your own feelings on it at all. I don't think it's saying too much or that it innately taints a reader's perception to know more about the authorial intents/what things you were invested in while creating it. In fact it can enrich the experience? without letting go of what I took from it either, I can still always hold these multiple different save files of my perception/experience in mind. It's an interesting work of art that any reader could rebuild into their mind into something else as they experience it, but also still something someone actually made with her own relations to it in mind... so in that sense it definitely feels valuable to be able to engage with you directly here. 

And you're welcome!! I remember originally worrying my comment was a bit too obtrusive/randomly sentimental to drop there but it was indeed in considering the themes of the VN itself that made me think, no no this certainly isn't the kind of place I'd receive judgement on that for lol, so I'm very glad that sharing it could be of some help to you as well. 

And yeah WIPs can be so difficult to  get going u_u I hope you have a fun and enriching time however you approach it!

Also on a different note, I was wondering if the URL to your twitter/X changed at some point..?  Clicking the link on your page says it isn't with an existing account. Or if you just got rid of it that's fair too lol, I'm not on there myself at the moment acc

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Oh! I kinda forgot I was still linking to that - though I guess I haven't been actively checked in here for a while. I definitely did get rid of it but I guess it's also maybe the only social I can have a specialized link to in my profile? Thanks for pointing that out; I don't really want to leave a dead link hanging, haha. I'm I guess passively floating around out on Bluesky now.

And yeah, absolutely - I consider myself both obtrusive and needlessly sentimental so those are both things I can appreciate even if you had been either of them. The idea I'm actively scrutinizing is actually I think sort of simple so it's really more a matter of getting in the zone and hyping myself up that it's something that will come off well and be as good as I'd ideally like for it to be - you know, just sorta stuff that everyone deals with for everything lol. 

I'm genuinely relieved Lucia came off okay. Her dignity was one of my biggest concerns and it would have sat poorly with me if I'd botched it and made a kind of caricature out of things that are personal and important to me.

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Ahh I see, that's good to have clarified, I was wondering if it was just an issue on my browser's end ^^''  I'm not much of a public poster myself nowadays but I have tumblr and bsky for lurking around. Handle is the same one as on here if you remove the U.

And that's great to hear too, I am sure you can do it :3 I've never participated in a jam myself but maybe someday a certain theme can coincide with a pre-existing idea that I haven't used for anything... the time limit seems like it can be either stressful or motivational I guess.

And yepp I get that, with things that are so personal and nuanced you really hope to get it right or to be able to guarantee some of an ideal recognition/response to that effort even if one can't fully control it. She was definitely a fun character so I look forward to revisiting it all in that reread sometime.