honestly the pictures dont really tell much my dear dev its hard for me to look at this and find out if id even enjoy it maybe go into detail about what the games about
who knows maybe i missed it but i did get bored of reading everything
I was initially confused by your comment and then realized you were super correct: NO section of my description just TELLS you what the game is. Maybe I'll add one to this project and I know for future projects, I will keep it in mind!
I'm going to keep the backstory up because it's important to me and I didn't publish the game to be popular. Thank you very much for your observations! :D
id maybe suggest putting that stuff at the bottom of a game page
game pages at first should be about what your game is about this way people can understand what your creation is about
then add personal notes like what you did
it might not be about getting populer but never the less if no one knows what your games about it might deter some people from even giving it a try in the first place