I like what the story was trying to do but was having issues getting the text to pop up for each section consistently. Could not really digest the story cause only 2-3 text pop ups worked for me.
Yea, I noticed that issue, I did have to add a timer so the text wont load till the previous text has finished. If I had more time I would have put more effort into trying to fix it, but I needed time to figure out other things and make the rest of the game.
