Until the bugged dialogue that freezes the game this was pretty interesting. I like how you kind of blur the line between dreams and reality (if I had a weird void in my bedroom closet that sometimes morphs into a dreamland where I have to battle monsters from my past . . . I think I'd probably be cranky at work too, haha).
I look forward to seeing you finish this! Like others have said, the voice acting is neat and the choices are lots of fun. Best of luck with it!