This is my opinion so don't take it personally — I do not like the appearance of the Protagonist of this game, it's like a mixture between Niffty and Moxxie. So could you give us a choice by implementing a character customization at the beginning? I do not wish to be an androgynous, but if it's too much of a hassle then I understand, it's not much of a big issue anyway, just a personal dislike.
Other than that, this is a 10/10 H-Game in my book. I especially love the BJ scene with Millie, that adorable face got me hooked. I hope you would add eating out scenes as well, I would love those. I cannot wait for more, but do take your time, and do take care.