To clarify where it is, it is up this road, this is on the left of the hotel:
You should be able to go up there at any time, just when you do for the first time after returning the cutscene plays. Your file should be correct yeah! But you can try plugging a number on "TimesFucked", maybe something like 20? Don't know why it's zeroed out and it might be that.
The path to the file is \[Bitshift] Cruel Serenade - GutterTrash [v. 1.0.7]\CS - Gutter Trash\www\DataCrystal.js
If that's where you dropped yours then it's correct, go up the alley and tell me what you see, if the cutscene doesn't start I'll be here to help you again.
Thanks for the help was able to get it to work! I am sorry if I was not understanding the insturctions clearly, but I was putting the DataCrytsal into the first one I see when I open www. What got it to finally work for me though was ignoring that one then opening js, then plugins then putting it into the DataCrystal in there! Either way thank you for the helps and can finally get to gaming hehe :3