I really liked this! the art is really nice and the atmosphere of the game is great! For a short game the worldbuilding intrigued me and the writing was good :) also some peak yuri in there, iktr....
I think the jump mechanic is a bit finicky as sometimes the extended jump wouldnt trigger when I pounce down. And the collision of the platforms that drop seems to be too big, as sometimes they would drop even when I hadnt hit them yet. But overall the more important part of a game like this (the enviroments and atmosphere) was good ! !