Now that's a quality submission! Camera work was great! No notes here. First person cutscenes often feel floaty, but in this case camera works good.
The lighting works great for the atmosphere, maybe the red is a bit intense, but it fits the frantic action. My only gripe with the art is the crack in the visor. I think it could be a bit smaller. The soundscape is on par with graphics. Hell, maybe better, because I have no gripes here :) It's intense, as it should be.
As fot the use of the theme- it's good! I'd gladly play the game starting with this!
Great work!