Very good art and world design, also cute characters! I’m really bad at both 3D platformers and puzzle games so it was a struggle for me but the concept was definitely very interesting. I can see this doing really well with 2 person co-op if you consider developing it further.
Some suggestions for improvements if you would like.
- Adding the ability to rotate the camera would be nice, since your viewpoint is often obstructed by other objects in front of the camera so you can’t see where exactly the characters are moving.
- Some dithered transparency on objects or some kind of distance based clipping mask would also help with that.
- The camera angle could get quite low at certain sections, and while I am not sure if that’s an aesthetic choice, it does make it slightly difficult to view the entire puzzle section compared to a more “bird’s eye” kind of view.
- The difficulty ramps up quite fast, especially with the third room suddenly expanding into a large area with many puzzles, which can get quite overwhelming for the player. Some more tutorial sections would also be appreciated.
- Lastly, the jump was a bit floaty and difficult to control, so some of the platforming sections felt hard to maneuver.
Overall you’ve got a really solid project going on here with a very interesting concept and a nice flavour. I would highly encourage you to keep building upon this post-game-jam, since I think this could easily become a popular game! My best wishes!