Let's go with the best part first- I really liked the comic book inspired art! The drawings were cool and the way camera worked helped present the action. The action was dynamic- at least to the degree that can be done with comic book pages.
The sound could use some more focus. This submission would benefit, if each comic panel had corresponding sounds played (for example hit sounds when the fight happens).
As for the theme use- I don't really feel how it fits the "5 seconds too late". The story itself looks engaging, and I wouldn't mind following it further :)
Over all- really good art, but needs more polish on sound, and clearer interpretation of the theme. Keep up the good work!