Ok, the art in this one is really cool. The use of cold color palette, and only using red in the end works wonders for the atmosphere.
The music worked in a similar way- the music and minimalist use of sound effects underlines the atmosphere. (there is a bug, where the sound only plays in one channel).
Each of the takes shows what it needs to show. There are no chaotic elements here- only precise storytelling.
Over all- this is very atmospheric take on the theme. I'd like to see where the story goes from there!