I don't even know how to explain what I felt reading this demo, because honestly, there wasn't really much to comment on. However, the writing is so smooth to read, and I'd say it's perfect—not too slow, not too rushed. You don't waste time detailing irrelevant things, but enough to avoid leaving the narrative empty. The promise this story makes really excites me to see how it unfolds and how this universe is built. I really loved what you're doing here.