Desperately needs a proofreader, what is it with your seeming allergy to capitalization? It looks bad, it feels bad, there's so many spelling and grammar errors that makes it hard to play through, even if you're good at skimming and letting your brain correct it as you go. Please stop having your shift keys be on strike for whatever reason, it doesn't make you endearing to start sentences without capitalization - it makes you look like a preschooler who doesn't know better and throws everything off. Acceptable in chat rooms, not acceptable outside of texts and instant messaging.