I would like to offer you some advice some of the characters eyes for no apparent reason role in the back of their heads it especially happens with Kate if you already fixed that then never mind this and also story wise I think there should be a little more friendship animosity between Liam and Andrea like have Liam have a few more witty comebacks and also the dynamic between Milo and Kate Milo is a little bit nicer than Kate but at the same time their personalities do meld and they seem like the same character and also during the volleyball match I think that having Sophie missed the ball was perfect so funny going back to the volleyball match I think Alice should say I haven't played this hard in so long I am exhausted since really if you think about it she hasn't played volleyball in so long