Pretty fun VN. First thing that sticks out to me though is that it's quite meandering. There's not much transition between scenes. One minute, René is a forest ranger, then suddenly he's on vacation, then suddenly he's man-hunting. Dialogue is a bit all over the place as well, talking about random things that probably don't matter to the story. Martin also shows up by chance quite often. Plot conveniences! It's pretty hot though, all that aside. Backgrounds are great and so are the sprites. It's pretty clearly a horny story with a lot of building sexual tension, which is always a nice read. Not a lot of stakes since everything goes just a bit too perfectly, but for this kind of story, I didn't mind. I'd have liked a bit more of a denouement to their story though. The VN ending right when they cum is a bit... self-evident. Still some good production values in this one though, so keep it up.