I enjoyed this. Here's some notes/feedback:
- I think you guys have a great visual style here and it really makes this entry standout. The music was quite good. I also think the sound design is decent for a jam.
- Are the characters 3D models ? Just curious.
- The movement is off. You move way too fast imo. My girlfriend was watching me play and it made her a bit motion sick. I would reduce the top speed of the character and introduce another way to go fast. Perhaps have the dodge be a proper dash and have it be a metroidvania upgrade.
- Combat is another thing that is a weakpoint of the project imo. I understand it's a jam, but it needs a lot of work for the next version.
- It was cool that the zoom factor would change depending on the room. It gave a very cinematic feel to the game when needed.
- Story and vibe was actually quite well done. You also managed a neat plot twist in the small timeframe of the game. Solid stuff !
All in all, there is potential here, but the combat and movement have to be improved. That said, I enjoyed my time !