My "Analytics" page shows that nobody has ever downloaded this game. At least play it before making conclusions. I made this small game in 5 days for a very small community of my friends so I don't think this game's story will be that much interesting for strangers.
I saw that you write these comments under some people's games. I can't say that it is bad or something. You write inspiring words for people. But please, play the damn game. It's a finished product, I made it for people to play it, play counts on my games are the biggest appreciation I can have.