Looks like this may be your first VN, and if so, congratulations on getting something completed! This is a solid jam entry that could use some tuning and fleshing out to really elevate it to the next level.
Spoilers and such going forward.
Touching on presentation first, the art looks really good and is a highlight here, even if it is a bit sparse with only one sprite per character plus the dinner CG. Choice of backgrounds generally worked well too, with the color palette and blur effects helping to sell the melancholy atmosphere.
As far as I could tell, there was only one music track. While it was fine and matched the tone you seemed to be going for, it did seem rather quiet except for the last 2-3 chords which were much louder and felt a bit awkward. The music also seems to drop out completely after the dinner scene. I know it can be a lot to ask for in a jam, but some more varied music or SFX could have helped sell the scenes, including the characters' changing emotions, a bit better.
As others have mentioned, there were some bizarre choices in how the writing was presented - there's first, second, and third person narration here, and the choices for when each was used don't feel very intentional. Like, we go from "...the lonely yote has left the safety of its solitary winter shelter" to internal narration two lines later in the same scene. We don't see that external narrator again until 100 lines later with "Felipe collapses back onto the bed," and I think that's the last we see of it. It would be a fairly easy edit to change these lines to "I've finally left the safety of my solitary winter shelter" and "I collapse back onto the bed" to maintain consistency in perspective.
Bernard's second person narration feels inconsistent as well. I understand the intent is to have him basically be talking to himself to push himself to act, but there are lines like "The room is dark, and you're lying on top of the covers of this shitty motel bed" that seem much more like they're spoken by a narrator rather than the lines that follow which are much more clearly Bernard's thoughts. Since you're already using the text color to differentiate perspective, I'd just keep things entirely first person.
Don't want to get too bogged down here but use of italics felt a bit inconsistent too (did he really say the thing about Satan's asshole out loud? Why would he do that?) and while proofreading errors weren't ubiquitous, this could have still used another pass for spelling and punctuation.
The plot and characters unfortunately felt a bit thin to me. Purkka made a comment below about the plot feeling like it was "stalling" by not saying much about the inciting incident, and I agree. Perspective ping-pong aside, we don't really get any details about what exactly happened with these two other than "breakup" until the very last scene, where we... still don't get very much. Felipe wasn't very emotionally supportive, according to Bernard, and Felipe also lost his job, so they had a big fight because Bernard's dad doesn't like Felipe (I guess?) and wanted to bring Bernard home.
Speaking from experience, it takes a lot more than one bad argument to destroy a five year relationship, and a whole hell of a lot more than one conversation to start repairing a broken one. In order to really sell the emotional beats here, the conflict needs to be developed further - what were these two like when they were together and happy? What drew them to each other? What issues or disconnects caused them to start drifting apart? Why does Felipe have a bad reputation with Bernard's parents? How was Felipe unresponsive to Bernard's emotional needs? What about each other gives them hope that their relationship can someday be repaired? Right now everything just feels too vague to have a real impact.
Overall, as stated above, this was still a solid effort, and hopefully some of the feedback here will be helpful as you continue to develop your craft.