No idea who tf could look at your game's characters and think "they're terribly written!"
They're not. They are fairly feminine, have their own issues, and most of the sex scenes don't feel forced. But that's the thing. People want it to be forced.
I downloaded this game for the action and story aspect of it. Two things that it never failed to deliver, all while still being engaging, heartwarming, heart wrenching and funny at times as well.
Whenever Yamada(it was him, right?) said something dumb asf, my face went •-• and you seemed to have predicted that reaction because the other characters did that face as well.
Harry, he's a real bro. Loyal to his gf, and doesn't fail to encourage his friends in their romantic lives as well. The main character isn't even manipulative (not as much as plenty other games out there) and seems to genuinely give a shit about the girls and honestly seems like he'd be loyal in a relationship. There are plenty things you did well. So as another comment said, whoever is shit talking you and Chika's storyline(or any other storyline for that matter) needs to go touch grass or idk, go for their generic step-ladder porn on the hub which has no substance whatsoever. "Oh step ladder, I'm stuck!"