Phenomenaly well made game. The characters are honestly well written and interesting.
Essentially my one, singualar critique is the way the dialogue gets displayed on screen. I just felt like it was a bit off for a while intially, until I realized it was because when a new piece of dialogue comes on screen, it originates from the centre and expands (no pun intended) out left and right as more text appears. For me atleast, it means that I kinda have to dart my eyes constantly to keep up with where I am in the sentence. Something that might work better is if it just starts reading from the left and more dialogue appears on the right, thats pretty much it.
I know, its super super specific and I wouldnt care one tid bit if it was a game with little to no dialogue but for a game where dialogue is the core of the experience... I think an option at least would be nice as it, of course, might not be everyones cup of tea.
Also P.S. I cant find a link to your discord, would appreciate if you showed me where it is, cheers