Thank you! I'm a little late in checking the comments so you probably finished it by now - hope you enjoyed it!
To be continued...cant wait. You have actually inspired me to try and make an adult Renpy based off a character arc I could never add to a story I'm writing. I don't know if I will get far enough in it to look good, but the practice should help with my writing. If I do get it going it will be because of your story. Your narration is "Le mot just". I want to be able to convey the emotion of the scene as well as you have written. Thanks again for sharing this story.