There is a lot to like in what has been released so far, a really solid foundation of what could be a potential powerhouse in the AVN world. It just needs a bit of polish in a few places. There are times where scenes or dialogue feel rushed because they start or end abruptly and aren't allowed to breathe or establish themselves. It makes some parts hard to follow because it reads like list of bullet points instead of a cohesive narrative. Improving the prose even just a little bit could really elevate the story to read more naturally instead of like a run on sentence. Otherwise I like everything I see here, the girls look great, setting and renders are well done and there looks to be a solid depth to the story, just don't rush to tell it.