The writing is very wonderful and builds a sense of dreaminess while playing. The sprite art as well as the main/game menu art is very nicely done and well executed. However, the game is very brief and it may just be me personally but I did not fully understand the premise of what was going on which hindered my experience a little. I think also some music would enhance this project. All in all, a very sweet yet brief game and I'm hoping to see more of what you do with it in the future :3