This demo had me absolutely hooked!
The writing is snappy and mature, without feeling excessive or out of place.
I'll admit, I was actually writing down notes of the state of the crime scene, complete with names and locations. It's been awhile since I've felt incentivized to not miss a single detail.
Atmosphere is something this game has in spades, and I'm very excited to see a full episode. It would also lend itself to multiple different cases and expanding the world!
Great work on the systems that control the game as it is.