Wow, having great insights like these are incredibly helpful! Thank you! I'll definitely focus on improving the pacing and lots more. Again, thank you for such a good review! :)
also, would you like to join our furry visual novel community on discord where we discuss, give feedback, ask help and all that jazz with other developers and people?
here is the link if you are interested
https://discord.gg/GFjSPkh