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I enjoyed the plot twists in your game, but personally, I found the main character a bit too impulsive and lacking in composure, which made me want to quit. I think giving the main character a bit more composure to solve problems would make the game more appealing to a wider audience. Thank you for creating such an enjoyable gaming experience. Keep up the good work! :)

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Thank you for your suggestion, but far too often in real life, I see people forcing women (including myself) to be calm, “logical” and “good”, just so they can get a little bit of respect as human. This is why in my stories, I prefer to let women be hotheaded and impulsive, and freely make stupid decisions. 

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Yes, I also think that forcing someone into a certain image isn’t a good thing. Giving the protagonist logic is simply so she can make choices that are beneficial to herself. I wish you good health!

It’s a good thing that she’s in fiction, isn’t it? 😂 Dumb choices are the backbone of a story.