The little chord transition at 1:15-1:17 is actually absolutely spectacular.
I hear potential when I hear things like that in people's work. I think compositionally, your development could be a little more varied, like it kind of is maybe a little static overall.
Mix wise, I think it's a bit dry and could use a bit more reverb.
Really, I still feel the music in my heart, which is what counts.
Great work! :)