Great looking renders with pretty good writing (though I cannot really judge the story yet since it is still early in development).
The jokes and references are a nice touch.
I am not exactly sure what the original language is, but I think English is not it. Some of the text did not quite match what was actually happening, for example one scene talked about a female character, but the text referred to them as "he" (unless I missed the point of them being a femboy).
As for the critique about songs with lyrics making it harder to read, I personally do not share that view. We are humans and can decide what to concentrate on. That said, I understand that some people, especially those with certain conditions, might find it harder to tune things out and focus.
And regarding the hate some people have for AI, people will always find something to hate. Personally, I think its use is totally fine if done well.