Your proses are all so refined and beautiful that sometimes my brain slowly melts into a messy soup, struggling to understand it all with one read. Which, I need to add, is not a bad thing! It's a nice way to let my mind enjoy elegant writing and letting your words paint me a wonderful work of art.
There's so many mysteries and unknowns going on with the plot that I am ever so fascinated with the story that is slowly unfolding before me. I am excited to read the next chapters and see where it'll all go!
I would also like to let you know that I enjoyed the way you coded this IF along with the sound effects you've added in. Gives it that delicious je ne sais quoi. You did amazing with them! ♥ Also, also, thank you for sharing the heights of the characters. I am someone that adores those kinds of details so I am grateful to see them being shared because it also allows me to imagine the MC's height if we compare it with the others!
P.S Turn 150's flirt choice was hilariously down bad that I had to select it haha!